Judge: Turtle
Rank: 1st
(You can find Turtle's judging comments here.)
Very impressive scripting-wise, though there were a few bugs. The scenario gives the impression of much more depth than is presented, which is a pretty darn good storytelling technique.
Probably the most technically advanced scenario entered. I feel like this one really got the feel of what a 1/10 contest entry should be, and the cool encounters and interesting visuals only made it better.