Judge: Turtle
Rank: 5th
(You can find Turtle's judging comments here.)
This is a big step up from Duck's previous work, and it sits on par with other good scenarios. There are a lot of cool ideas and a lot of detail. Its main problem is that it really isn't a full scenario. He deserves kudos for being the first one to finish, especially since he probably could have made it larger if he had taken as much time as some of the other designers. This one is last, but it isn't a "worst" by any means.
It seemed a little sparse and railroad-y, and I didn't like the fact that you seemed to just wander from one fight to another. Then again, I suppose that could apply to just about all BoA scenarios, so whatever. Duck does get points for having probably the best integration of the randomized elements, so props for that.